boomervoncannon 1,541 Posted September 25, 2019 Time for a fun thread while we wait for Xbox launch on the 8th Soon™. Post your Atlas oriented haiku here. For those not familiar with haiku : https://poets.org/text/haiku-poetic-form I'll kick things off: Will there be a wipe Everyone and brother ask From the devs silence 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gomez Addams 278 Posted September 25, 2019 Words are cannonballs Posts are like waves of the sea Boomer and Realist 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Winter Thorne 696 Posted September 25, 2019 I used a haiku generator. It didn't produce a great haiku, but it gives you reviews of what you wrote, and the reviews are perfect. https://www.poem-generator.org.uk/haiku/ Vitamin - A Haiku by Anon Achromatic isle A complex, vitamin sail in spite of the bear The reviews: Auto Praise for Vitamin - A Haiku "The juxtaposition of vitamin and bear is truly inspired." - The Daily Tale "I don't like short poems. So why am I reviewing a haiku, you may wonder? Well, I liked the title - 'Vitamin'. It went down hill from there." - Enid Kibbler "Amazing how so few words can set a scene so perfectly. I close my eyes and all I can see is the colorless islet." "I felt that I was a vitamin. It was spooky. I hope to read more by Anon. Perhaps next time, something longer." - Zob Gloop "I've always wanted to write a haiku about a vitamin. I can't belive Anon has beaten me to it." - Betty Borison 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites